Friday, January 20, 2012

The Darkness



Daytime it’s the sun rays;

At night it’s the artificial light, stars and moon;

Yet the darkness remains;

For I don’t know how to escape it;

But hope that someday light will pierce the darkness;

For that is what I am waiting to see and feel.

Keep Smiling,
Prashanth.

P.S.: Poetry is not my usual way writing blogs, but I wanted to try it. I was inspired by Saru Singhal’s way of writing poetry on her blog (http://sarusinghal.blogspot.com), short and impactful. Her writing is too good. Mine is, in no way a match to hers but I wanted to experiment it…..:) Image Source: Google Images.

12 comments:

  1. well. i am not that good when it comes to understanding or commenting on poetry blog post but these are beautiful lines by you.......

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    1. Thanks Irfanuddin, appreciate your comment..:) That's an honest acceptance.

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  2. Well experimented :) and very well *word*ed...

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  3. Great way of experimenting!! And you've conveyed your point Prashanth!! There's light at the end of the tunnel buddy :)

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    1. Thanks Binu..:) I know there's light at the end of the tunnel, but the only thing is that when that light will be seen...I know it's not far...:)

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  4. Well Done PK :)
    These are really wonderful :)

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    1. Thanks Jasper....thanks a lot...:)

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  5. Good one PK :) Exceptional for a first time I must say :)

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    1. Thanks Vijay....tried my best to come up with some nice words....:)

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  6. Couldn't tell that poetry wasn't your way of writing. It comes very naturally to you.

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    1. Thanks for the feedback. Just made an effort to write in poetry form. Hope to write some more...:)

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